So yesterday I managed to rewrite my query letter in such a way that I was satisfied with it. Not sure if it’s better than the other or just as adequate, but I liked it. I tried to tighten it up a bit, get to the main point of the book faster, and keep it as interesting as possible. I then snail mailed one query package and e-queried another agency that only accepts e-queries. I figure I’ll send it out for the next 5 or 6 queries at least to see how it goes. So hopefully we’ll see if the new letter garners any more response than the other one.